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Re: Questions about Japanese localization of SharpCapUserManual

Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2021 2:07 am
by Toshihito Watanabe
Hi,

Requirements - Choosing Between ASCOM and DirectShow - Pros of ASCOM
text:
"Bit depths of >8 and RAW modes may be available."

The inequality sign ">" is inappropriate, what about text like the following?
“Bit depth greater than 8 bits and RAW mode may be available.”
8ビット以上のビット深度とRAWモードが利用できる場合があります」


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Watanabe

Re: Questions about Japanese localization of SharpCapUserManual

Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2021 1:39 pm
by admin
Thanks,

I have corrected this and I also found 2 or 3 other places where < or > were used in the same way and changed those too.

Robin

Re: Questions about Japanese localization of SharpCapUserManual

Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2021 6:29 am
by Toshihito Watanabe
Hi,

At this point, we have only reviewed the contents of the following htm file in detail、he rest of the files will take a very long time, Therefore, you may find something that needs to be fixed?

1_Foreword.htm
2_Introduction.htm
3_Requirements.htm
4_SharpCapPro.htm
5_QuickStart.htm


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Installation and First Steps - Installing the Camera Driver

In the following text, the inequality sign ">" is not necessary :
"Once the camera drivers are installed, restart Windows, plug in the camera and check via Control Panel > Devices to see if the device (camera) is working properly."



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Watanabe

Re: Questions about Japanese localization of SharpCapUserManual

Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2021 12:53 pm
by admin
Hi,

that pattern is used quite a lot throughout the manual as a short hand for things that must be done in order - for instance

Go to Help Menu > Show Log

is an example. I think I am happy to keep it that way.

cheers,

Robin

Re: Questions about Japanese localization of SharpCapUserManual

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2021 3:18 am
by Toshihito Watanabe
Hi,

Installation and First Steps - Installing SharpCap

Need to fix sequence-number:
"12. Connect the camera to the telescope."
The sequence-number is "7.".

The sequence-number after that is the same...
Therefore, the last
"21. If all the above has worked, the SharpCap and camera installation has been successfully tested."
The sequence-number is "16.".


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and,


Consistency of the string "exposure" with the manual?

Testing SharpCap - This is SharpCap’s Main Screen - Key areas are
Exposure – controls the camera exposure

The "Exposure" string is "Exposure time"(露出時間) in the Controls_en.json file, but shouldn't it be unified with the "Exposure" string?



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In addition, the text under Exposure:

「Check that the image changes in response to changing light levels – for instance shine a light into the telescope or onto the camera sensor and check that the image becomes brighter. Alternatively, cover the telescope/sensor and check that the image becomes darker.」

(光量の変化に応じて画像が変化することを確認してください。例えば、望遠鏡やカメラのセンサーに光を当てて、画像が明るくなることを確認してください。例えば、望遠鏡やカメラのセンサーに光を当てて、画像が明るくなるのを確認したり、望遠鏡やセンサーを覆って、画像が暗くなるのを確認したりします。)

When translated, it shows duplicate strings (underlined), so why not the following text.

「Make sure that the image changes in response to changes in light intensity. For example, shine a light on the telescope or the camera's sensor and check that the image becomes brighter, or cover the telescope or sensor and check that the image becomes darker.」

(光の強さの変化に応じて画像が変化することを確認してください。例えば、望遠鏡やカメラのセンサーに光を当てて画像が明るくなることを確認したり、望遠鏡やセンサーを覆って画像が暗くなることを確認したりします。)






Watanabe

Re: Questions about Japanese localization of SharpCapUserManual

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2021 1:38 pm
by admin
Hi,

good spot on the list numbering - I will fix that. There are actually software products that you can buy that have the main purpose of spotting list numbering errors in word documents - largely used by law firms...

I'm happy for you to use non-literal translations of the manual content if you feel that would read better in Japanese. I think the English version of the 'check camera response' text is fine.

On the exposure/exposure time thing - would it be valid to use the Japanese for 'Exposure' rather than 'Exposure Time' in the application?

thanks,

Robin

Re: Questions about Japanese localization of SharpCapUserManual

Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2021 7:00 am
by Toshihito Watanabe
Hi,

On the exposure/exposure time thing - The control panel asks for a time element, so 'Exposure time' (露出時間)is appropriate.

However, in English, do you keep the word 'exposure' or change it to 'osure time'?


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Installation and First Steps - Removing SharpCap - Text of caution

I think it would be better to make "appendix" a hyperlink.

The source code should look like the following:
<a href="37_Appendix.htm#_Toc523950340">Appendix</a>


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and,

Installation and First Steps - Testing SharpCap
「・・・・・the folder holding the captured image.」

It is not a folder that was on the desktop from the beginning, so that needs to be explained. (For completely new users)

Example text:
(The first time you install SharpCap, it will automatically create a folder on your desktop named "SharpCap Captures".


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Watanabe

Re: Questions about Japanese localization of SharpCapUserManual

Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2021 2:02 pm
by admin
Hi,

using the phrase 'exposure time' in English when discussing a camera would be considered an odd use of the language - just using the word 'Exposure' would be considered normal.

Thanks for the suggestion about the creation of the folder - I will add that.

Robin

Re: Questions about Japanese localization of SharpCapUserManual

Posted: Sat Jul 03, 2021 1:26 am
by Toshihito Watanabe
Hi,

In Japanese, when we talk about "exposure" of a camera, we use it to make "exposure time" longer (or shorter) than the vague word "exposure".

So what if you did the following:
In English, use the word "Exposure"「露出」 in the program or manual, and use the word "Exposure Time"「露出時間」 in the same way in Japanese.




Watanabe

Re: Questions about Japanese localization of SharpCapUserManual

Posted: Sat Jul 03, 2021 5:49 pm
by admin
Hi,

yes, that would make perfect sense.

thanks,

Robin